Monday, January 24, 2011

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Well over 160 million Indians labeled as "Untouchable" are tainted at birth into a caste seen as less then human. The caste system dating over 2,000 years back is still plaguing society, engulfing the proficiency of the medical field along with it. The fabrication of the traveling medical clinics would eliminate caste based discrimination. Putting into practice such clinics ensures the administration of proper medical care to underprivileged civilians. By implementing clinics in affiliation with the efforts of Sant Sarwan Dass Charitable Hospital, a country will be united and lives will be saved.

2 comments:

  1. Very nice. Do you want people to donate to such a fund? Is it a known charity?

    Debbie D.

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  2. Professor D,
    I was having a bit of doubt about the "hook" or call to action part of my script. The hospital that will be funding these clinics is in India, but othe audience would never have heard of that particular hospital. Introducing it altogether would take a long time. Do you have any suggestions as to how I could introduce the hospital that would be sponsoring these clinics?
    Thanks so much!


    Nancy Badhan

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